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[New Eden - Pilot]

Nice

Although I expected a bit better humor I find the entire package pretty good. The animation is great but you could try and improve the characters mouths/lips because they don't really give the impression of speech. The character contrast is pretty classic, its very lovable and it also gives you a lot to work with so I've already set my meter very high for this show and I really hope it delivers. Since this is a pilot I expect that everything will get better over time, work with the humor for a bit and tweak the animation (first of all lips) and this might be great.
To conclude, nice and entertaining 6 minutes, 4.5 stars.

NewEdenseries responds:

Thanks for your review, appreciate the honest feedback. The lip sync is one of those trade-off's we'd had to make at the moment to speed up the animation process but we'll look at it moving forward.

[The Dragon Girl]

Bravo!

This was so touching and calming. It reminds me of those moments when you find someone special, but slippery - unreachable. Someone, who, you think is so special that you're always finding yourself trying to catch. The animation is not super, especially when he's running, but it's ok. The music choice is very good, and finally - I like it very much.

MrGUS responds:

Yeah fbf is something I'm still not very good at, maybe I'm not patient enough to put the full effort, I feel like I just want to finish it and get the thought out there. But I'm glad that you consider that the emotional part was there, and it meant something for you.

[Entertainment]

Hmmmm...

It's pretty good, the animation, the style - perfect, even the narrator that some people hate pulled me even deeper, because I see what you're trying to accomplish with this. At least I hope so. Because even the people that are talking about entertainment and stuff are also %u02DDbrainwashed%u02DD because you can't run from it - it'll catch up. Nice one. I won't give it 10/10 because I think you should have made more (read %u02DDbetter%u02DD) examples.

akoRn responds:

oh ok, thx man